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Commentary and criticism on 2 poems?
First Poem
When I look up into the night sky
I see the stars holding on to history
The bright specs are being tainted by
The black sap of nighttime obscurity
The night sky soaks the past with hope
Trying to reduce the pain and distress
It covers the memories lessening the mope
Only to create an even worse mess
The stars know not to ever forget
Yet to remember and value the past
For it is a dozen fish and life is a net
It will anchor us so we won’t go too fast
Second Poem
Hold me tight do not let go
It’s not my fault that I’m not right
Don’t leave me in the cold snow
I will sit in my mind frozen with fright
My memory is aching like a sore toe
I try to think and I try to fight
It’s not good when you are to go
I need your warmth and welcoming light
My memory is nothing now it won’t show
It is almost gone and almost out of sight
Sanity, please have mercy for all my woe
I don't know why I don't like: It covers the memories lessening the mope/
Only to create an even worse mess." It really doesn't explain how it makes a bigger mess. That one really doesn't seem to fit in the poem.
As for the second one, put a comma between "tight" and "do" because it is grammatically incorrect. The same between "mind" and "frozen." I'm not sure about the part about your memory because it fits oddly. It could probably use a comma before "now it won't show."
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With our busy lives, it can be hard to find the time to give our bodies the attention they deserve. But if you don't find that time, it shows, and you feel it. Healthy bodies look better, and they feel better. So take the time to take care of yourself, and feel great about doing it. Bear in mind that it is well worth the extra effort.
First and foremost, keep it clean! There is nothing more fundamental to your body's overall health than basic hygiene. Everyone should bathe thoroughly every day, without neglecting any part-no pinky is too small, no toe is too far away for the scrub-brush. Not only is a good scrub sanitary, but it helps keep your skin glowing by removing grime and dead skin cells to reveal the fresh, beautiful skin below. And a relaxing bath or shower is good for your mental health. Use your bathing time as personal mental-health time, letting yourself unwind a little bit.
Frankly, just bathing just does not contribute a big deal to personal hygiene. It is when you use the proper products, such as a bubble bath or a body scrub that you are truly cleaning your body. However it is easy to overlook this fact, because most people consider just using a bar of ordinary soap and water to be hygienic. This may have been true in the dark ages, but it does not certainly work now.
Stress may be psychological, but it has physical manifestations that show big time- blemishes and cold sores can be brought on by un-managed stress, so clear your mind as well as your skin. To continue to protect that skin throughout the day, you should use a moisturizer to help fend off dry skin and itchiness, as well as to protect it against the cold and wind. And to truly do everything that you can to keep your skin healthy and young, your moisturizer should always have UV protection in it-dermatologists recommend a minimum of SPF 15. Nothing wrinkles and ages your skin like the sun, so protect yourself from it every day, even cloudy days, and in the winter, and use heavy sunscreen when you know you're going to be out in the sun for long periods. A tan may look nice for now, but you'll thank yourself for the sunscreen a few years down the road, when all of your tan friends look like an old leather handbags and your skin is still smooth as porcelain.
To maximize your body's overall health and look, life habits count big. You can put all the cucumbers on your eyes that you want, but if you aren't getting enough sleep at night, that puffiness and those under-eye bags aren't going anywhere. You can moisturize your skin, and use the best shampoos and conditioners, but if you aren't eating a healthy, vitamin-rich diet, it will show in your complexion and the shine of your hair. Pay attention to the basics. Get eight hours of sleep, plenty of exercise, and eat a well-balance diet from diverse sources, and you won't just feel incredible-you'll look fantastic!
Always remember that it is never too late to look better. With a proper diet and lots of relaxation you can actually begin to look younger. Don't forget to drink lots of water and remember that your body is your temple so take care of it the way you are supposed to.
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